Finally
He arose
from bed
To hear a knocking,
he answered,
aggravated.
His drowsiness
fleeing
Could it really be?
It was,
her.
She was soaked
completely awake now
he was in for a shock.
She tried to explain.
He wasn’t listening.
Just her smell
and he felt
her touch,
And his own
desperate
need
So without hesitation
She revealed
hidden beauty,
he fell
back on his bed,
wanting,
revealing
in return.
It was finally
happening
She had him
locked in her embrace.
As he loved,
his hands
chased
The motion
they created
F
i
n
a
l
l
y
she had found him.
Now was the time
with lights growing dim,
their kindred bodies
hooked,
adrift in one another.
Her moans,
his sighs
deep in the night,
alone.
As she sang
he melted
and joyfully cried
out
her name.
F
i
n
a
l
l
y
he exploded.
She screamed
out
her satisfaction,
sweet liquids flowed,
both.
This was more
than he ever dreamed.
She had done
him
in
yet he longed to stay.
It was crazy.
He smiled
F
i
n
a
l
l
y
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OMG, what's goin on with everyone! Geez I know it's the love month but gosh, those passionate juices are flowing.
Sis you definitely wrote the heck outta this one, I mean like seriously...Alright you got some cold water around here cuz I think I need some so I can cool off!
, EXCELLENT JOB!!!
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Oh my goodness Cin, I leave you alone here for a few hours and look what happens
You are definitely heading me off at the pass, Baby Girl, with this one. I can see where your thoughts were going and think you did an amazing job.
Love you heaps
Mum
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woahhhhhh auntie this is a hot right..told you i was innocent 
beautifully penned as always
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lol thanks my babey girl
Your thoughts are appreciated
Aunty CIn
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Farrrrrrking HOT cindy... the poem too lol
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hahaha, thanks Kenny
, Much appreciated, I know I always turrn you on lol
CIn
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woohoooo I wanna be woken up like that .....gosh
nice , tasteful sensual write Cindi....
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Thanks Poppa, I can only try and make a guy's dreams come true...through my words lol
Cindy
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