my memories are with you
dont feel alone.
My heart will beat inside you
When I am gone.
eat the fruit of love's tree
which I hav grown
and the seeds of friendship
which I have sown
Remind my friendship and love
which I have shown
be busy in joys given by me
and dont mourn.
with all the cheers and joy
You were born.
So dont feel alone
my heart will beat inside you
when I am gone.
A contest entry
- Song Prompt by xXxCry-HavocxXx.
300 points, ended February 7, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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good job
it is a great poem. good work -
Oh my goodness, I really like it!! great write!
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GREAT
I like the flow of the poem,nice expression .good work
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awww. this is really nice. i love it
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Beautiful piece, very touching...
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That's amazing and you really have put a lovely enchanted words that speak themselves. It's sad, a farewell, a message of departure and I was of the view that you prefered hope. I really even liked the background. It enhances the effect of the poem. Once again it's really wonderful. Best of Luck!
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This is AMAZING.
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i like the message of this poem "love me now, love me later , but do not mourn for me as I will always be with you". very nice.
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awwh I love this its very sweet and touching :] this person is well loved and probably warm and fuzzy lmao great write <3
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Tear jerker. Very touching and sweet.
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sweet. a beautiful farewell for someone well loved. nice write.
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