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Play you like a Song

Can I play you like a song,
Strum your body slowly,
Pluck your velvet Skin
Blow a tune on your neck,
Can I play you like a song,
Of tender moments,
When you just purr
Can I take your nipple in my mouth,
Make your body reasonate,
Play your long legs,
Like a stand up Bass
Can I play you like a song,
Like the sonette that you are

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  • June-bug
    February 7, 2008

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    Wow with tender stroking and gentle plucking there this will be one beautiful song being played. Wonderful write with well choosen words that one can create the image in the mind...when do you play?


  • gullionmar
    February 7, 2008
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    good

    good metaphor ,but only if meant for someone special take care mary