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Another Day

another day
another way

another pill
so nothings real

another dream
or so it seems

another face
a different pace

another blade
just so you can get laid

another love lost
is another life cost

another mother so mean
another child not seen

another fathers dissaperace
involvs someone's interferance

another friend gone
one more sad song

Author notes

This is my life... I'd be suprised if you got it but everything has a meaning, a purpous behind it.. If you want to know what they meen ask and I will tell you... Everyone has their own perspective on this piece and they all think theres is rite.. even those closest to me couldnt understand it all...

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  • fallenstar588
    February 7, 2008

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    I love this. The line that realy caught me was "another pill, so nothings real". Right now I have the pills, my doctor thinks I'm taking them, but I need to think it over a little, because like you said, nothings real when you take them, especailly not your own emotions. I really like this poem, it's pretty deep for it's length. Like you said we all see different things in it, if you would like to share I would love to hear the story behind it. I think I'm going to have to go check out some more of your work now.