Stimulating winds
blow trickling rain
down my shivering neck
Enticing me to take cover
Storms are much more beautiful
Looking out of a foggy window
Then tasting the storms wrath
A contest entry
- Nature's Canvas by Charity Ann.
450 points, ended February 13, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
whats your opinion about it?
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excellent~
I thought I was going to be reading about fog...
Got fooled this time..
I agree with you ...would rather be inside any day...
watching the rain instead of tasting the storms wraith
Best of luck in the contes...this is one of my first reads of yours so nice to meet you as well...
I entered this one too hope you come give mine a read
Hugs
Susan~~~
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That's partly true. . .I really like this poem, it doesn't really have an obvious beat however I really Really like your use of words, in that area you never cease to amaze!
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Simple and beautiful...you did make a spelling oops in the last line, wraith should be wrath. I like how you said the storm is "enticing you to take cover." Very nicely worded. I agree, it's more fun to watch a storm from the comfort and warmth of inside! I also liked your title...I thought I was going to read about fog. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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I could feel and see the storms wrath with within as well as without...love the emotions flowing through this piece thanks for sharing
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AMEN to that dear poet!
WE have winds tonight that will be 70+ mph....and I
plan to be safely inside snuggling up to my honey!
You wrote this imagery to be enjoyed!
good good job on this poem!
ears2hearyou
Kathleen : ))
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NICE WRITE'''''
Very Sweet...'Good Luck In Your Contest...'God Bless"...Love, Shirley shaw-raytown,mo...
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