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Stained Red

Roses are red,
Violets are blue.
Suger is sweet,
So are you.

But the roses are wilted,
And the violets are dead.
The suger bowl's empty,
And my wrists are stained red.

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  • devonthebig
    February 6, 2008

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    I like the flow of the poem. you have the gifet of poetry. don't stop ritting poems. your frenad devonb