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Gold, Bronze - Haiku (5-7-5) Gosling

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Gold, Bronze - Haiku (5-7-5) Gosling
a baby gosling
flaps his wings furiously
reflection flying

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  • Knight70 silver member
    July 8

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    Congratulations on some well-deserved trophies!

    You've written an excellent haiku, with a gorgeous AHA! moment. I LOVED this!

    Don


  • Aerden gold member
    April 17, 2008
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    This is good! I often think that haiku about reflections in water are the best kind.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    April 16, 2008

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    excellent~

    Perfect sis
    I am so glad you got the Gold Yahooooooooo
    You go girlfriend...
    Beautiful ku
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~