It's a picture perfect feeling,
The kind you wish you could snap real quick
and replay
over
and over
and
over again.
Too bad I've lost it
I forgot to take pictures.
I want you so bad
to love me.
I want you so bad
to never lie.
I want to believe you when you say you don't like her.
But my heart is breaking,
baby.
Without you I am broken
and salty tears drip
D
O
W
N.
Funny thing is, I haven't even lost you yet.
The pictures would burn anyway.
A contest entry
- *Just Be* by Miss Faith.
650 points, ended February 9, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
one more day.
Comments
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Great outpouring of raw emotion and thought! I'm a huge fan of the landscaped style poetry. Using the spacing and stylized line layout to express emotion and change in tempo. You did a wonderful job
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love it.
"Funny thing is, I haven't even lost you yet."
oh i know this and feel it every day.. what a joke. At least you can write some beautiful poetry about it. beautiful write bby.<3
p.s loved this title, perfect.
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this was gorgeous, and I think everyone has felt thins way at some time or another...thank you so much for entering!
"It's a picture perfect feeling,
The kind you wish you could snap real quick
and replay
over
and over
and
over again.
Too bad I've lost it
I forgot to take pictures."
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