When the wind blows
It's just me sighing
When the storm comes
It's just me crying
When the Earth shakes
It's just me falling
When the fire starts
It's just me dieing
Author notes
I love Metaphorist he he see i read everything and I love your poetry!
And for the "We R Family!" contest:
Eminent Fate and i would like to be um... cousin!!! yay cousins!
A contest entry
- Enter Your Best! by Metaphorist.
600 points, ended February 7, 2008, 33 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I am starting a family!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! by angel of the dead.
300 points, ended February 15, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - We R Family! by Abidoodle.
600 points, ended February 12, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Best of the Best! by abba12.
600 points, ended March 6, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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each stanza is just two lines but it's soo good! i just like alot how u use the mataphors in this poem!
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good i love it what do you want to be in my family i would love to have you
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Lol on the author's notes. You're one of the few that actually looked at my poetry. Short, but a great concept. Thanks for entering.
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This is truly great
Oh you have touched all the elements within and thats great .It flowed well and held great meaning Bravo
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