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Drunken Angel

Bent over
my bedside
eye to eye
I try to kiss you goodnight

It's past midnight
You just got home
You go to kiss me goodnight
I can't

I whisper in your ear
I can't kiss a drunk
So goodnight my drunken angel

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  • PerfectImperfection
    February 9, 2008

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    A nice piece of thought on the prompt. It seems it could be taken to mean a couple of things. 43 words. Thank you for your entry!


  • IntrepidFantasy
    February 8, 2008
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    Such a heartfelt and true poem. It is repulsive to actually kiss someone like that.

  • Liquid memories
    February 6, 2008
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    yes tis a sad feat to kiss one that smells and staggers also. success in the contest.