i'm the words you never said
and the tears you never cried
i'm the dream that didn't came true
or theforgotten wish ipon a star
i'm the pain you didn't realize
and the lie you never told
i'm the thing you decided to throw away
that didn't mean anything anymore
i'm just worthless now
no value left in me
i've gone off to a better place
a place where i can be free
i'll just spread my wings and fly away
soar to a plce were a can say
there are no tears lft to be cried
or unwords unsaid
all my dreams and wishes came true
and all my pain has goen away
Comments
-
good
good job!
-
sweet. I really Like this poem. I really like "i'm the pain you didn't realize and the lie you never told i'm the thing you decided to throw away that didn't mean anything anymore i'm just worthless now no value left in me i've gone off to a better place a place where i can be free" cuase it sums up what I feel like alot. The ending was also great. In this poem you captured emotions that not to many poeple who have not or have felt this pain could. This poem can sum up alot of lives. Keep up the great work!!!!!!!!
-
-
thx i really try i connect with my readers try to make them feel the pain other people feel i hope i did that for you
-
Adding your comment:
