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What's the big hype?

 

Every so often
I like to dress up,
to be Mr. Sniff

or even Bat-pup.

I imagine ~ I'm flying,
exploring unknowns,
all the while watching
for just those right bones.

And sometimes I find them,
all juicy and ripe.
I know I’m a dreamer,
but what’s the big hype?

I’m happy,
that’s what matters,
all dressed up and pretty.
Flying over dog houses
all through the city.

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    March 13, 2008

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    Hood-Winked!

    This is a very cute poem I really like the imagination that comes through in this piece, wonderful rhyming and flow confratulations on a well-deserved gold!

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • Lady Altheia
    March 13, 2008

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    Hoodwinked

    Hehehehe, cute. I wish I was a superhero. I want teleportation so I can get anywhere without having to use public transportation. Congrats on your gold.


  • debilynn gold member
    February 10, 2008

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    LOL this is such a hilarious poem! great rhythm and rhyme. rich in imagery. thank you for sharing this. keep writing sister! congrats on getting the gold! God bless you always


  • Huntress silver member
    February 6, 2008

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    sounds like my kind of super hound Thank you for entering