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our love is no more

broken into a million pieces
smashed on the floor
spread across the seven sea's
our love is no more

no more kisses
no more hugs
no more joyful days that we loved

what ever happened to what we shared
the days when i closed my eyes
and you were there

as i fall asleep tonight
a tear runs down my cheek

but your not there to comfort me
as i weep
our love is no more

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  • crimsonredrose
    February 6, 2008
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    Oh my god. How do you write such good poems. It's amazing. This poem so rocks.