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Death Star

Scourge of the galaxy,
Yet as small as a moon,
Strikes fear in every heart.

Great big starship,
Destroyed by one so little,
Because of one small flaw,
A tiny hole.

Weapon of the Emperor,
Weapon of the Sith,
Destroyer of homeworlds,
A gigantic Superlaser.

Built by a Massive Empire,
Destroyed by a small group of Rebels.

Floating around Yavin,
Orbiting Endor.

What small station could cause so much fear?
Death Star.
A name no longer mentioned,
But a name held in all memories,
A name still yet feared.

Author notes

My favorite Star Wars quote? One about the Death Star would be: "Fear will keep the local systems in line. Fear of this battle station." -Grand Moff Tarkin
I also like: "Hokey religions and ancient weapons are no match for a good blaster at your side, kid..." -Han Solo
One more: "Your father's lightsaber. This is the weapon of a Jedi Knight. Not as clumsy or as random as a blaster. An elegant weapon from a more civilized age..." -Obi Wan Kenobi
Lightsaber=cool!!

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  • Manoj Sanyal
    March 14, 2008
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    nice poem about star war.
    Thank you for participation.
    Good luck.


  • Judo
    March 8, 2008

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    awesome poem. don't understand all of it, but it's really good. i'll give you credit for that. good luck in the contest. i might do the contest.


  • alandriel1138
    February 14, 2008
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    just an update- my contest has only two entries and if i do not recieve any more i will delete the contest

  • alandriel1138
    February 7, 2008
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    very nice, you did a lovely job describing the Death Star- the ultimate weapon.

    I really like
    "weapon of the Emperor/Weapon of the Sith/Destoyer of homeworlds"
    and
    "Death Star./A name no longer metioned,/But a name held in all memories,/A name still yet feared

    great job and best of luck in the contest

  • crimsonredrose
    February 6, 2008

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    Sweet my favorite part of the poem was Weapon of the Emperor,Weapon of the Sith,Destroyer of homeworlds,A giantic Superlaser. It's really amazing. This poem rocks

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