We are like a butterfly
who is hidden for who we are.
So we have our own shell
that everyone sees.
When we allow ourselves
to get out of our cocoon
we reveal ourselves
to show who we really are.
So the others can see
we are like a butterfly
who had revealed itself
to show our beautiful image.
Author notes
This poem is about we are like a butterfly who has like the hidden shell, and when we reveal ourselves others can see our beautiful image.
Please tell me what you think
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This is a great poem.
This poem desribes me a little bit because I am shy at first but when I get to know people more, I start talking more.
Great job.
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Thanks.
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Wow, This is a beautiful poem. I love the thoughts and the warmth of it all. Oh, yeah love the background.
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FROM OUR COCCOON TO A BUTTERFLY, FROM THE FLESH TO THE SPIRIT VERY BEAUTIFUL GOD BLESS
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This is beautiful. And so true. Thank you for sharing.
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I enjoyed this very much. The image you have painted here is so true, we emerge from our coccoon and reveal either the Butterfly image or the Moth
Well done 
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Well Written
A beautiful image you have penned. I too, love butterflies. As Christians I believe we all have emerged from an ugly shell into a beautiful butterfly.
Keep up the good writing.
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BEAUTIFUL
I just love the feelings you are sending to the reader...we are just so much more than we think we are...sighs...i do love butterflies and the wonder they hold within....beautiful comparison! thank you for sharing with me
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This was a beautiful poem you have penned!!! . I love poems about butterflies. a pleasure to read. You take care, Sandy
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