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Mechanical perfection

Exquisite curves within the frame
the detail filled within,
Excruciating tenderness
where do I begin?

luxurious looking leather
laced so tight it shows,
Lascivious feelings gather
radiation flows.

The mixture intoxicating
designed to gain the most,
of thrust and acceleration
be first past the post.

As for the colour shining
gleams within moonlight
and then to top it all
a girl also in sight.




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  • OnceUponAMind silver member
    August 7
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    Nice! The title threw me for a spin! I was not at all expecting what followed! Congrats on the trophy


  • wishintreeUK
    February 8, 2008

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    An excellent piece. I have always admired the motorbikes that have all stood in rows along the seafront in the Isle of Man during the TT Races. Each machine gleaming in the sunshine, lovingly polished to perfection. You surely deserve your trophy for this particular entry, well done!

    The last line is just right.

    Katie