what is this place
why am I here
what has been done
the light so bright
the celling so high
no movement is allowed
the people that I ate
was I a little late?
is the room spinning
is my clock winning
is it over am I dead
or is that just the voice inside my head?
so I finally see
the only point of living is being alive
A contest entry
- DOODLES - WHERE DID THAT COME FROM? Picture Prompt - by swanridur.
700 points, ended March 11, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - it's alarming how loud the silence screams-- by noir eyes.
300 points, ended March 2, 2008, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for your entry. Your piece follows the prompt very well. I wanted to say 'the only point of living is being me' though as it goes with the flow you build up towards the end.
Best wishes
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