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el...Our Emotion Secrets

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As we walk through the blustery streets of emotion

our hearts cling tightly together as one

Hanging on to a romance of imaginary dreams

our times are filled with laughter and fun

 

Skipping rhythmically to the tune of our heartbeat

we joyously dance sensually in our souls

Vibrations of feelings overcome our bodies

as we succumb to delightful moods that unfold

 

Together we manifest in dreams of shocking clarity

spending many hours of passionate love in our mind

Powerfully spiritual is our emotional energy

as our hearts connect and share our commitment in time

 

How could I ever fantasize in my dream

if your heart filled with imagination left me alone

Constantly I expect to continue as your companion

laughing and loving on fantasy trips as we roam

 

 

 

 

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  • R S Adams Jr silver member
    February 19, 2008

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    wonderful imagery...

    you have painted a vivid picture here and I can feel the emotion dripping off the words. Well done with the free verse and the meanigful spacing.


  • alaskanamber
    February 15, 2008
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    Oh my is the first thing that comes to mind. When I saw it was a tribute I was relieved that I hadn't misinterpreted the true meaning. I could feel the horniness emanating off the words, granted slightly disguised by wonderful imagery. Waht a great poem!


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    February 7, 2008
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    The black and white
    lending even more power
    to the well-chosen words!


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    February 6, 2008
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    shocking clarity is our pleasure xx