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Avery And Sasha

A romantic Australian man
Very much in love with an
Exceptional Canadian woman. She
Really makes me feel so very
Young at heart.

And soon I will be with her,
Never more to part,
Destined to be together.

Soulmates describes we two,
A match made up in heaven
Sent down by God above
Hoping I will be amazed by Sasha,
An awesome show of His love.

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  • PonyPride
    February 18, 2008
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    honesty, i cant stand the form of this. I am also very irratable right now so please dont take this harshly, I just dont like how they are sentences restrained to stanzas. However, your words are clever


  • Angelic Princess21
    February 8, 2008

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    this is beautiful hun you did a great job with this one. thanks for sharing this and keep up the good work.


  • Sandygram
    February 8, 2008

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    Oh, what more can I say except stunning and beautiful. What a wonderful acrostic you have penned. So very heartfelt and loving. You two sound so perfect for each other. Thank you for sharing your happiness with us here. Its great to read ahappy poems among the sad here on this site. Bless you both. Sandy