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altitude



ascended hangover
proportions ever expanding
comprising emotions
soaring above
with your wings
enfolding


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13 words

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    March 26, 2008

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    Great metaphor brewing in this piece. The opening line is excellent and i just keeps on solid throughout. I really enjoyed this.


  • leander Moderators member
    March 25, 2008

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    This is very short what you have written here, but I totally have to agree with my co-judge on this one: great impact for such a short piece

    Thank you for entering the contest!
    Leander


  • Celticmoon
    March 24, 2008

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    Few words and they speak much. It if not often I am impressed by ones ability to pen a short form and make such an impact, bravo!
    Thank you for entering.
    Best of luck to you!


    Blessings
    Bel


  • Tam
    February 9, 2008

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    ...and I, too...

    rise within the rich glory of your poetic beauty, sir!
    thirteen words never painted a more inspiring journey...
    this is lovely!
    Blessings! Tammy


  • Naridill gold member
    February 7, 2008

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    Nice word use - this has a beautiful yet intense emotions curdled around it. Nicely done.

    Thanks for entering,


  • Stardust-luvr
    February 6, 2008

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    well done my dear angel for your wings have enfolded around my spirit on my weariest of days. best of wishes xxx

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