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All In A Day

I like everything
Whether it's old or new
Black or blue

Oh no! I just got lasagna on my white t-shirt!!

Going to New Zealand
To photograph the scenery
So full of poetic emotions

What would you say if I named my child Poe? No? Edgar Allan Poe perhaps?

The only difference between noon
And midnight is how much light
There is outside

I really need to go suntanning, my skin's getting white. Oh, but I'm hungry!

I want the world the way it is
Except without the past say... 200 years
Of technology... that can go

Houses have walls and floors and windows and doors.

My horse, I ride
I ride it outside
Next to the huge garden

The water is cool... maybe I'll swim in it after I tan... but I still have to eat.

I like playing games
And yelling out, "Baldurdash!!!"
It's just so much fun.

No, my cat do not like hats... I don't like hats on my cats either...

I'm loving and kind
And you know what?
I'm going to go get some braces

... After I eat, tan, then swim.

Author notes

well that was incredibly fun

What music do you listen to, by choice? everything
2. What colour are you wearing now? blue
3. Favourite food? lasagna
4. Oldest piece of clothing you still wear? t-shirt
5. Where haven't you been, but would like to go? New Zealand
6. What would you do there? Photograph the scenery
7. What first awakened you to poetry? emotions
8. What poet do you most admire? Edgar Allen Poe
9. At what time of the day do you do the most writing? afternoon/middle of the night
10. Shipwrecked - desert island - crawl out of the surf - what is the first thing you do? find food and water, then tan while thinking
11. Given the power, what would you do to change today's world? take away all the technology made in the past 2 hundred years
12. Given the choice, where would you live? in a house
13. If you had a horse, where would you like to ride it? outside
14. Show me your garden. huh?
15. Where do you swim? in water
16. What is your favourite passtime? playing games
17. What is your favourite game? Baldurdash
18. Do you wear hats? What kind? no
19. What is your strongest attribute? caring
20. What about yourself would you most like to change? i'd straighten my teeth

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  • just mercedes gold member
    February 13, 2008

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    Great responses, thank you for this entry. Great poem, and an intimate peek into the spirit of you. Well done.