The cool breezes from the southern hills
especially in the evening times smile to me
wishing me all the caress and concern I should have
at this age where dependant culture doesn't prosper well in hearts
The waves from the sea coast actually salts my sweet desires
but the breezes from the living waters of rivers fasten my hopes with gilt edges
Every where better than the odd sounds in thundering moods,
the silence in tunes cajoles me with many aspirations
hovering all around
I know the fragrance of the waving heart
and scented smell of the ecstasy in inner soul
Never mind to eulogise my beloved all the time
for making me feel and experience the love trends of life
Author notes
feel and experience the love trends of life
A contest entry
- Gentle Winds by Summer Dawn.
360 points, ended February 8, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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this is an excellent poem. very well written with good use of educated grammar. poetry i love to read and write.
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Thank you
THANK you for all the nice words
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