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Dating choices

You said you'd love me
Through and Through
Said you'd be there
You know it's true

So what is this
I'm learning now
Secretly plotting
I wonder how

Talking with her
Behind my back
What quality does she have
That I lack?

There must be some reason
You chose her over me
What is so special about her?
What can't I see?

You told me you loved me
Always and forever
You played me the whole time
Aren't you clever

You said you'd love me
Untill the end
So why are you dating
My best friend

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  • ExpectingMommy18
    February 7, 2008

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    ouch the ending was harsh. you did a great jon with putting your thoughts on paper.this had alot of emotion which was good.
    thank you for entering and good luck in the contest