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Full moon

Full moon
Giant orb in the sky
Lighting up the night
When in my eyes
My flesh flee's
My bones snap
Reforming and lengthening
Sending my body pain
My mind in ecstasy
My hands lengthen
Nails sharpen
Eyes black as night
Mouth to snout
Hands to claws
I howl with joy
You in my eye
I hunt
I kill
I feast
End of the night
You go down
Sun comes up
I turn human
Fur to flesh
Claws to hands
Snout to mouth
Strong to weak
Weak and frail
At least until tonight.

Author notes

my form is more free writting than anything else.

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  • xwarriorXprincessx
    August 10, 2008

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    righteous.

    this reminds me of something from a werewolf movie. idk why.

    nice write.

    best wishes and best of luck!


  • 2lullabyhaven
    April 6, 2008

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    Thanks for your entry, wow, so intense - may I ask you for a little more info - in your author notes could you please express what form you personally used - thanks


  • William Vercelli
    February 6, 2008
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    You very much like the images of the wolf and the moon. Nice descriptive piece of work here too.