"I'm young and I'm hopeless, I'm lost and I know this"
"I've seen enough now to know that beautiful things don't always stay that way"
"I wanted to hold onto the things you'd never say to me"
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"Gimme the truth even if it hurts me"
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"Summer air reminds me of all the feelings of your love"
"And we're putting our hearts out on display"
"Just tell me that you need me and stay right here with me."
"Communication is a lot like the wind when i speak, its like no one understands and im left with empty hands"
"I used to know the sound of a smile in your voice"
"We all want something we can't have"
"Losing their souls in a material world"
"But I don't care what they say, I don't need them anyway."
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"I keep my true thoughts locked beside my hearts black box"
"Smiling on the outside, hurt beneath my skin"
"at my high school it felt more to me like a jail cell, a petty treachery"
"i want movies of my dreams and pictures on my wall"
"I live with my regrets, I sleep with what I said"
"the rain came down so hard that night"
"i will stand up to the pain, wake up and fight again"
Author notes
Okay well for the contest, there were a bunch of quotes you could use to be inspired by and to write a poem... i decided to arrange to quotes into a poem... well hopefully it flows well enough to be considered a poem... and i was listening to some music [[GC of course]] so I added a couple quotes of my own to make it work a lil better.
A contest entry
- GOOD CHARLOTTE INSPIRED by Mad As Rabbits.
550 points, ended February 12, 2008, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
just a lil something something
Comments
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hahaha! I was just thinking about...."what if someone wrote an all quote poem" and then I find brittany's.........hmmmmmm......sweet!
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go me.
go me.
lol
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I like this. I like it a lot really. It's a cool idea and it could've gone horribly wrong but you took the chance anyway. And it works awesomely!!! At first, it kind of strained my eyes and I was thinking ohhh boy this could be interesting. But you pleasantly surprised me. It flowed very nicely and I like it. It was a nice little tribute too GC. Good job!
Thanks for entering.
Love Always,
Caroline
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