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Puzzle Pieces

i just don't understand you.

you're like a thousand-piece jigsaw puzzle
that i've almost put together.
so close to finishing; only to find
that i've lost the final piece.
(a corner one, the tip of the sky;
hardly important but
painfully obvious.)

you're like a thousand-piece jigsaw puzzle:
i'll never be done with you.

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29 Poems in 29 Days. Day six--"1,000 Piece Jigsaw Puzzle". For Ellie. (i hope i did you justice!)

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  • plastic fantastic
    February 9, 2008
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    you did me justice. this is awesome. i love the part in parentheses, its really funny.


  • rollingzen
    February 6, 2008
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    I know!...it's...it's..... PUZZLING!