The wind dies down, the light recedes,
and blissfully sways the flowers.
Night's melody fulfills its deeds,
while we dance away the hours.
Come pull me near and draw me in,
to inhale your salacious scent;
for nestled deep within your skin
is where I find our love's intent.
Ethereal glow, a dew mist,
glides lightly over our faces,
and blesses lips that will have kissed;
our bodies passion embraces.
How sensual is our dwelling place;
the tints that glow, so eloquent.
Romance emerged in lover's grace,
while in your arms my days are spent.
A contest entry
- Romance by Frodofan.
600 points, ended February 9, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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the swirl of romance's skirt catches eyes; blinking in love's open desire, a lovely trip into the coloured realm of happiness.
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Outstanding
I liked your choice of language and the fluid rhyme. The imagery is intense and sensual, full of romance and a feeling of love. Best of luck in the contest.
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This is a very romantic piece. Filled with love and beauty. Your rhyming was done nicely. Thanks for sharing and entering, good luck.
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you are the ultimate romance writer, that is for sure. what a beautiful feeling it leaves...
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This is such a lovely poem that flows sweetly. Nicely done my friend.
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overflowing with romance in such a graceful and passionate piece..a beautiful waltz that dances rapture across the screen-excellent!
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I have said on numerous occasions my feelings on your work so waste not time by reiterating and just say excellent
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oh - I am feeling a Byron influence in the last stanza..this is gorgeous...
your poems are always filled with the romance that I wish I could write!!
what beautiful imagery and love & romance..
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Bravo
Ah, so whimsical and soooo romantic! Lovely and well done poem. Loved it, loved it! bravo... bravo... bravo...
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The love and passion of a newlywed is written all over this beautiful piece you just penned for all of us. The rhythm and rhyming made it flow so softly to my heart and leave me sitting here *sighing*. Elegant were the words that filled my mind's eye with such lovely imagery throughout. May your passion and romance burn endlessly. Best wishes in this contest. It sounds golden to me. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce
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A very romantic piece. Paints a very blissful picture! The choice of words and tone made this a very gentle and light poem - reminiscent of a lovers sigh.
Thanks for entering.
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