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A little valentine story

Exscuse me miss, what's your name
whurr you from, and can I come, and possibly Can I take you out
Tonight?
I mean WAY OUT like through the
clouds in the sky
Cause that's were I go when I think of you every night
See baby, I gotta be the one you need
the one you love, the one you know
Cause baby girl I love you so
promise I won't let you go,
Promise I'll hold you tight, promise you'll be all right,
Don't be afraid baby, just enjoy the flight
Cause I'll never make a promise that I cannot keep
Can't you see?
I would never lie to you,
and I will never treat you untrue
And baby I'm not sayin that you should just rush and give me your heart
I'm just askin that you
like me real hard...
and with that bein said
Heaven must've smiled on me, like it did the earth that day
the day when God created the sun and said let there be light
and like the sun with it rays, your love showers on me like God's grace
(April Showers)
For you I will place my life on the line, I will be your sun in the sky
for you
I will die...
Cause your love is just that wonderful
like a river peaceful and deep
your soul, like a secret, that I could never keep
When I look at every inch of you I know that it's true
that God must've spent a little more time
on you.
And after becomin official, one instead of two
the pimp I had in me died
cause I wouldn't allow myself to be untrue.
see, Tianna, I was made to love you
and with that bein said I love you, I love you
and I'll never stop loving you
From now until forever, that's how long I'll be true
I'll make you this vow, and promise you now
until forever
I'll never, never stop, lovin you!!!

P.S. And as I close out, (sigh), let me take a second to breathe
Cause baby I don't wanna leave, but I gotta go right now
And I'll be back before you know it.
But happy valentines (slash) future wedding anninversary day
I love you.
(Kiss)
 

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For my baby, Tianna.

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  • Expression
    February 6, 2008

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    awwwwww mann this was sweeet...im really gonna have a hard time judging this contest... but this was nice....i see you stole sum lyrics frum a couple songs on here but hey it fits lol good job!!!
    MUCH LUV ALWAYS
    ♥KAILA♥


    • blakdiamone
      February 6, 2008
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      It was meant to be lyrical see I had a mixtape made for her, and the poem pretty accentuates the message of the whole cd. So you can tell I got some Luthor V on it, some druhill, Jagged edge, Ciara, and Mario, so J. holiday, Trey songz, and Monica and Nsync. All included with this little sculpture I bought for her yesterday for Valentines day.

      • Expression
        February 6, 2008
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        aww thats cute!!! you done got all extra mushy lol

        • blakdiamone
          February 6, 2008
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          Hmm, guess I gotta try harder to get into the prelims huh?

          • Expression
            February 6, 2008
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            actaully no...but i'm only givin 3 trophies...soo this is gonna be hard

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