Shes screaming things
she should've whispered
across the parking lot.
He's sitting beside her;
but he can't say a thing
because he'll never understand
her wall of survival.
She's creating specific worlds
behind the scenes of her yesterdays.
Things don't mean anything
when she's hurting[broken]
like this again
[She wants to feel safe with him]
The wind whipping through
the chill october air
where they meet for the first time
crossing arms over railroad tracks
and ignoring the direction of the widespread world
There eyes are meeting
in the flashing red lights,
and their ground is shaking
as the snow falls around them
She steps back[her eyes darkening]
but he grabs hold of the ongoing train
and takes off
into another snow-filled place
[She's going to find him again]
So she watches him
disspear into a restless oblivion.
She waits at the stop
[nothing in hand]
but her own heart
steadily beating behind her chest.
She has words stored up
singing in and out
as she picks such a correct order
to let them loose
So he can finally hear
[he understands her heart]
It's a cloudy day
and the sun seems to be irritated
by how the smoke
from trains;planes;and cars
are taking over it's view below.
But she's taking x's and o's
to mark her way to him
because she can't see
more than ten steps in front of her
but she'll find a way home
[to his snow-filled land
safely behind their very own walls]
M. M. Hipp
1 30 08
9 46 a m
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well...idk.
im sorry i havent been around much lately.
major school and such.
im quite confused on which train to catch and ride into my future with. but i guess we'll see where fate takes it huh?
♥©
ForeverSoFarAway
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bby, ily more than anything [=
i got drunk tonight, i love him, but he doesnt want me.
you'll find your train, its a trans-atlantic one departing now, arriving in kings cross, london [=
like glitter&&glue
[♥...forever]
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i know.
i saw that flight. then the train that would take me to you. but my rents are forbidding me from going anywhere until i turn 18 which is 5 very short months away. not even 5 bby.
I love you.
so very much.
and i miss you dearly.
like glitter&&glue
[Forever...♥]
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wow this is truly beautiful. I'm torn between two trains as well in my life, i just can't find the right one to take. I loved the title and the first stamza was awesome!
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thanks so very much for the comment darling.
im leaving it up to fate for the trains...though i think i found the right one today.
so i guess we'll see. my best of luck to you darling.
thanks again.
♥
Forever
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