The adorable face with the marvelous black hair
The sweet taste of her skin with the feeling of despair.
She owns the light,
Yet her misery asks for more.
She wants the rich night,
But she remains indefinitely poor.
She walks into her dreams.
She knows no radiance.
Author notes
http://hakanphotography.deviantart.com/art/Walking-Into-A-Dream-5-75554838
In life, there are many things that we want but can't have so we depend on our dreams to give us the satisfaction of having those things.
Please tell me what you think
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thank you for entering and good luck
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you are correct about that writer aren't dreams wonderful?!!! thank you for writing you did her justice

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awww this was sweet but also sightly sad.
We all tend to look for our dreams to be an escape...and it sometimes end up as an disaster.
Great job and good luck!

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Thank you
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Love the use of imagery. ^_^
Good luck in the contest.

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sweet. thanks!
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It's got a great feel to it. I really like it. Thanks for entering.
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