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Just Smile

That warm sensation
That spreads through out
That for some reason
              {I don’t think anyone knows why}
Just makes you smile

That tingling feeling
That coves the body
And some how
              {Nobody really knows how}
Just makes you smile

That floating emotion
That lets you fly
And in some way
              {No one knows}
Just makes you



Smile

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  • wanderingstarlet
    February 6, 2008

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    laney i love you, we used the same background for the same contest... lmao. *hearts and hugglez* (x's and o's or somehting like that" lol.


  • Beautiful-N-Broken gold member
    February 6, 2008

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    Second line though should be through....line 14 know should be knows......other than that, very good write! Keep up the good work!! Thank you for entering the contest