Sadness sips within this vase
Leaving quite a bitter taste
Years of flowers, linen~lace
Watery fears drip down this face
Filling up my bitter cup
To it's designed desire
Hopes of dreams, as I grew up
As dawn's daisy dreams inspire
Lovely smiles and joy you bring
Within the songs that your heart sings
So as I strum upon these strings
I see your angel wings
Shadowing my darkest cries
Answers to my questions why
Just to fill my vase that's dry
For even knotted daisies try
So thanks for all thy living waters
That your soul pours upon skies blue
Washing away my tears of sorrows
As dawn's daisies dreams come true
Author notes
Inspired by my dear friend -dawn-
Written November 19th, 2003
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yay to the dawn's daises
to dawn itself in fact too. usually i am either just walking up or just going to bed at that time lol those budgies sure do make a racket - a good piece don't wear your fingers red raw with that strumming.
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Excellent!
Sadness sips within this vase
Leaving quite a bitter taste
Years of flowers, linen~lace
Watery fears drip down this face
Filling up my bitter cup
To it's designed desire
Hopes of dreams, as I grew up
As dawn's daisy dreams inspire
Lovely smiles and joy you bring
Within the songs that your heart sings
So as I strum upon these strings
I see your angel wings
Shadowing my darkest cries
Answers to my questions why
Just to fill my vase that's dry
For even knotted daisies try
So thanks for all thy living waters
That your soul pours upon skies blue
Washing away my tears of sorrows
As dawn's daisies dreams come true
Excellent Piece Of Poetry, love the form, the style, the content...You rock, and thanks for sharing you!
Love yas!
-Me
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