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Meta-Physical Gravitational Diffusion Theory

Unrequited evidence does sing,
Soft reveries of fallen dreams,
Hidden within the melodies,
With the heartbeat of ages, it does ring.

So, I’ll gather the memories,
Held to my soul and echoing,
Of a place without time,
Where knowledge is nothing, and wisdom, everything.

Looking deeper into the shallows,
The atoms’ stories told, beyond the realms time.
In it’s chemical breakdown,
What is the half-life of the spiral’s flight?

How does one define speed without time,
When the distance of travel is standing still?
Emotion, broken down and numbered,
Left lifeless, unable to feel,
“For the sake of Science!”
Though defining the fall of humanity,
The statistic, the casualty,
Though, outside of bounds, the anomaly.

So, in the end, what is a dream?
And what is the difference of reality?
Is it but a glimpse beyond time?
Looking through such, no answers, you’ll find.

Take a step back from what you see,
Forgetting all your past’s reveries,
And take a step beyond the laws, for they are doubts,
And rise without wings, beyond your gravity.

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  • Kedris
    February 8, 2008

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    Absolutely fantastic! Great imagery and philosophy. It does a great job of making you see outside the box.
    Well done!


    • Karsis
      February 8, 2008
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      I destroyed the box.
      Not in this, just in my thought process.
      Anyway, thank you.


  • UrbaN PlaguE
    February 6, 2008

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    This is probably my favorite piece, of what I have seen from you. This is an amazing write that leaves the reader so much to think about. Great job.

    -Josh


    • Karsis
      February 8, 2008
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      Aye.
      Thanks, man.
      I'm glad you like it.