My soul I bring to you,
marked as deep passion rose petals.
Drops of me, floating on the tears of a rose.
I came here today for you,
but all you have left for me is:
vivid water, spewed with the essence of raw emotion.
As the light dances across the restless sea,
and the birds glide across the sky,
I will wait.
A contest entry
- Quickie Picture by creationsfromheart.
390 points, ended February 6, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a dark and mysterious piece. I love it and the title. Great work here.
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Oh very nice
Mystical with the fact of wanting, I like this piece cause it plays with the imagination when reality can be so dull. A beautiful piece that you shoud be proud of !
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i love the last line and how it is written there! i love the simile on he second line!!!
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the beginning I am not to fond of
but the last part of this is fantastic!
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