To say thank you is never quite enough
For the way you make me feel
Finally able to open up
Finally able to be real
I've never before felt so much love
Words cannot convey what i feel inside
An angel sent from above
You make me feel so alive
Author notes
Love
A contest entry
- Anything and Everything To Do With Love, Good or Bad by Blooming Poet.
385 points, ended February 12, 2008, 73 entries
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Honorable mention
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Comments
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Aww this is a beautifully penned poem about love.
Full of passion & emotions.
Good write!!
Thanks for entering & best of luck
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I love it,short simple and to the point
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great poem. it says so much
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God write. You may want to revise line 7. I belive you were trying to spell "sent". Very nice. Good emotion. It flowed well. Good luck and thanks.
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this is very simple, but sweetly said.
these are thoughts that i myself have had many times in the past few months.
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Im sorry but i asked for 15-20 lines, and this is too short. Apologies but i will have to dq you x
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This is a simple sweet poem. I actually like that it is short. It is a bit cliche for my tastes, but I really appreciate the expression of gratitude and love that you portray with your words. You are very lucky to have found that feeling with another person.
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man sooo much feeling in this i felt it
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Simple is nice, though I feel almost like this unfinished ... and even that I like. The rhyme scheme is also nice and it flows.
Very nice.
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i like the simplicity of this
thanks for entering and good luck
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Such a beautiful love poem for your special person. I know God sent my angel Jason too me almost six years ago now. We are truly blessed to have found the love of our lives
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i thought it was pretty good, i was kinda upset it was so short, i hope you'll continue, and good luck in my contest!
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this is exactly how I feel about steven, so I can relate. IT was always hard for me to show my true feelings and emotions to overs, but he's managed to make me trust my judgement a little more.
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wow i like this its realy from your heart i hope the person you wrote it for reads it
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short and sweet and so filled with emotions and deep thoughts. thanks for entering
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really sweet write. really emotional and heartfelt.
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