Sue Cardwell the poet makes me smile
With her couplets all rhyming in style
She gets better at it all the while
Amera her friend drives her higher
It's clear now she's climbing the spire
with her words that are fuelling desire
I'm glad I can call her at will
While she still has a bucket to fill
When she's perfect will she need me still?
Sue
Card
Well
Author notes
OK as far as I know this is totally new
We have triplet stanzas
Each having lines consisting of three, three beat feet.
So it is a triple, triple triplet!
And it is all for Sue Cardwell
In a list
Please comment below. Spelling or rhyming or scanning corrections welcome.
Comments
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Indeed the mere mention of,
the sweet poets that you love.
Leaves me feeling quite...unknown,
im sure they both appreciate your heart and soul;
always
Passionspromise
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Thanks Jeff for my little pome
A trophy for this would be chrome
I'll print it and keep it at home
The help you give me is great
Not handed to me on a plate
The day that we met, was it fate?
You've opened the door to my cage
With words that now spill on my page
Thanks Jeff I'm at the next stage
Many thanks Jeff...Sue xx
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