Moonlight illuminating my aqua eyes
Revealing life as masochistic and amicable
Though never shown to mortals
For they are composed of roseate rose petals
Author notes
25 words or less
A contest entry
- Looking for Favorites by just-an-amateur.
600 points, ended February 10, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pimp up my prewrites by leander.
650 points, ended February 21, 2008, 108 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Another poem that displays a beautiful painting. Great how you managed to capture so much in just four lines
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Thank you very much!
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Ah, I see a philosopher here. You struck a poignant note here with your stunning imagery. I had to look up a word or two but still, that's good for me. Captured within these 24 words you managed to take my breath. I wish though that you had used a tad more punctuation as that may have enhanced the piece. An excellent write though! Thanks for entering and best of luck in the contest!
~M~
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Thank you for your wonderful comment and for reading. I'm gald you enjoyed it!
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Short, yet remarkably powerful.
The wording in this piece, is breathtaking.
It flows easily, and each word catches the essence of the overall piece.
Well done!
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Thank you very much!..and thank's for the spelling tip!
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