Celebrating Silence
Alone, alone on the wishful hilltop
Alone , alone on the longing beach
Alone, alone in the silvery garden
Listening to dreams…stealing hopes
Celebrating silence……
Please tell me what you think
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Sometimes silence is a true gift, especially in this day when there is so much noise and clutter around us. You have a deft hand here in describing beautiful solitude. A great job.
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So full of emotion and yet so peaceful and easy to read. I enjoyed this very much.
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Lovely!!!!
You have penned a lovely poem. Your imagery describes the beauty of silence so well. A pleasure to read.
Take care,
Sandy
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Outstanding
This is musical and I liked the way the poem developed with a light tone and peaceful flow of words. I thought this was poetic and charming to read.
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I crave silence, my life is very busy...too busy in fact.
This is a wonderful write, I adore this imagery...
Many blessings
~A~
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I Love it.
Moments of sweet loneliness, a feeling of Dejavu, but with someone dear, a warm memory to keep and reflect on during those times when you are alone and celebrating silence.
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craving
A craving, a day dream, beaming hopes, well, well... nice - longing lingering license.
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Hmmm....I wonder....
" a wishful, a longing, stealing...."
I think I do detect, sniff, sniff, a note a sadness here. Do I truly sense a fungus amongus not celebrating silence at all, but lonely and forlorn and wishing, longing, stealing dreams from another place?
Ah but then, perhaps I am cynic, a glass half empty kinda a gay...but...you see...I am not....
Smiles...
Amicus...
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There are so many times i wish all life would just slow down and i could just...be. Enjoy the silence, enjoy the time you can just exist without anything to care about. It will be missed come later on.
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Peace is not the chaos of the storm
but the "balance" that comes after it
Enjoy the silence and breath....
Hugs...Eddy
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