He makes me feel beautiful whenever i'm with him.
His eyes just peirce right through me...and I don't know
why. Hes my everything that I've wanted for a long
long time! I've been searching for love in ALL the wrong
places and now i know im right where i belong. When he
holds me it makes me feel like i've haven't known
him for that long...but i haven't. When we talk,
he's my best friend, i feel like i've known him for ages.
I felt lost and felt like my soul was empty but now i know...
I know where I belong.
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The line breaks are weird; it's like you ended lines in certain places just to make your sappy diary entry look like a poem.
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Thanks, baby. I make you feel like you don't know me? that sounds bad almost but i'm sure you didn't mean it that way.
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this brings an amazing feeling into my soul! it has wonderful meaning and has a lot of heart into it! but i think it could be worded a little different or something! but keep it up!
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