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Smoke the Day Away

I smoke the day away.
Sunsetting time to play.
See me and you dont know what to say.

Cuz im living life filthy.
I dont know what to be.
I see the light and it scares me.

Walking away into the night.
Yet always ready for a fight.
Doin some shit that just aint right.

Actin' hard but yous just a bitch.
Thinkin im impressed cuz ya ass is rich.
Smoke some shit then leave you with a cut&stitch.

I be livin' wicked on the southeast side.
Fuck all ya rules i dont like to abide.
Your turn is over now step aside.

I pulled out my axe and you just ran.
I see you now as an excuse for a man.
Tryin ta live a thug with a fake ass plan.

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  • Darkside11
    February 6, 2008
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    nice flow..i like the tripple verse ryhme scheme you got goin on