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Bringing Peace

 

 

This separate entity does indeed bring a focus,
more times than we realise our worlds collide;
like the gathering of loose threads,
fibres react to those static parts of life we often do not see.

How otherwise would we connect the universe to thought?
a transformation so profound it becomes a healing to the bones;
understanding through experience stimulates the mind,
allowing the conscious to meditate on life's path as it unfolds

And so we watch and learn, understand others emotive bursts,
shades of light and dark as they emerge to clarification;
each having some holistic balm easing someone's pain
ripples reach out, touching anguish, washing it away,


......... bringing peace.

 

 

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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    February 18, 2008
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    An amazing entry.

    And so we watch and learn, understand others emotive burst,
    shade of light and dark as they emerge to clarification;

    Very intelligent and meaningful words.

    A brilliant entry and completely perfect to this prompt. Bravo poet. An amazing entry. Thank you. ~Pamela

  • Matthew-Parry
    February 8, 2008
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    Gorgeous! It certainly brought peace to me, as I read your poem! And the last stanza concludes this write wonderfully! Your backround and the artwork included also contributes to the essence of peace that you have brought forth here in this entry. Great job on this fine poem! Best of luck in this event!

    Keep Up The Great Work!!!
    Matthew


  • Falecurst
    February 7, 2008

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    That was simply remarkable.Really.

    "How otherwise would we connect the universe to thought?
    a transformation so profound it becomes a healing to the bones;"

    All I can really say is that it was amazing,Seriously nice work. A poem to bring a mind nearer to a state of haeccity. Truly.

    Deserves more little yellow happy dudes than I have the option to click on.


  • haikumonk gold member
    February 6, 2008

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    Wonderful poem and presentation. "ripples reach out, touching anguish, washing it away".... is a wonderful conclusion and thought. Good luck!