to her canvas
of love
two wilted
flowers
never to be -
a lover’s
Picasso.
In a list
A contest entry
- Short and powerful by The Kake Show.
1068 points, ended February 16, 2008, 26 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite Mania 2 by Celticmoon.
450 points, ended April 7, 2008, 64 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Mally, I couldn't even possibly begin to give you
and suggestions here for improvement.
You are a master of few words that impact hard and heavy.
I have always admired that about your pen.
Thank you for entering!
Best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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Dare I say WOW..I am so glad that I came to read you today. You are some kind of poet. This is so beautiful. Congrats on the well deserved win. Great job.
Kelli
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WOW!
This one is amazing! I love the emotion! Great way to use your 15 words!!! -
this is one of my favs in thee contest... shh dont tell any one lol
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awww, i love this,it is simple and beautiful =)
wonderful job, and best of luck in the contest =)
stephanie -
So very short but so very haunting with thought,
how sad this canvas is.
Thanks for sharing,
Warm thoughts.
Frozentearz
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Yes, this is mighty powerful - wilted flowers say it all. Nothing m ore need be said in this poem. Very concise.
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powerful it is, there is always hope, with a picasso...
you bring beauty and hope to hearts, wishing for love... good luck in her contest...Moons
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This piece paints and creates a sadness of longed for yet never to be love.Masterful composition.
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