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Your Fingertips (Inspired by Kalexi)


Your fingertips
caressing me
stroke fires
within my heart
titillating touches
blaze into my soul
carnal lips
once roaming
linger bringing bliss
flames of passion singe
my essence
with your mark
branding me forever
as we entwine
in ecstasy


Patricia Gibson-Little

Author notes

Inspired by Kalexi’s “Stir the Flames”  http://allpoetry.com/Poem/351274

This is one writer I alway enjoy reading.  She has such a nack for writing poetry that touches me.

Patti
Written November 19th, 2003

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  • Almighty Aphrodite gold member
    January 29, 2004
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    Lovely Karen is one of the few people who inspires me to write, as well, and I couldn't hope to copy or emulate her style. This definitely has her touch, and I think you've done a magnificent job of further "stirring the flames".

    Take care, and thank you for your comments.

    Many blessings,

    Raven Aurora


  • Kalexi
    November 19, 2003
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    Patti

    Oh my, this is soooooooooooooo beautiful, sizzling with so much sensuality

    I am so honored that you were inspired by my poem, you did a wonderful job enhancing the passion

    's
    Karen

    p.s.good luck in the contest


  • November 19, 2003
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    OH i forgot to say.. bonus points for the link. lol


  • November 19, 2003
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    Yes, when i went over and read that poem it was very good (just see my comment on her poem and see).. I liked this poem as well, short and sweet. Just like the other.

    Good luck in the contest!
    ~ Jack Hertz