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Nature Ends It

As the leaves of lies become browned,
Everything I've ever depended on falls to the ground.
Over my head there becomes a cloud of burdened precipitation,
But the rain never hits me, everything's lost in the lack of translation.

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...not true....well...maybe...

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  • SweetLeaf
    September 28

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    B-E-A-UTIFUL (lol) imagery.
    i love this. it's super awesome.
    may steal it ;]
    jk.
    i love that it combines two different themes: loss and fall/autumn.
    it's amazing.
    send this to congress.


  • Dusty
    March 4, 2008

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    I like this alough you say it is not true for you it rings a bell to strong in my heart... I love the first line " as the leaves of love become browned," and "everything ive ever depended on has fallen to the ground,