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Ridiculous

Second time we've talked about it today
Same old thing, same old thing
Over and over we say
Chances are gone
Vanished
Banished we say
Apologies
Quit it
Can't hear it
Circles we're running in
Same thing each time
Tired
Now's the time
You have to go
This repetitive nonsense
Is eating
Eating
Eating at my ears
Your tears are killing
Killing
Killing my eyes
This is ridiculous
We're supposed to be adults
But
Over and over
We do this
Running in circles
It's ridiculous

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    February 7, 2008
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    This is a frustrated poem... I don't like to be caught in things like this and I hope that you are alright - you have my best wises... well-written, this conveys such a sense of powerlessness and weariness to the reader, wonderful

    Keep writing

    Polly

  • TabbyCat
    February 7, 2008
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    Man, I hate those types of relationships. Sometimes, you just have to let things go!