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I Am Kitten

Be not confused by what is seen
qualities of a lion I do possess
the mane is not a main concern
holding ground when tested
scratching and clawing as needed
courage comes from within
if mirrored images are what's to come
I'll be awesome all grown up
for now I'll play with the yarn
I am kitten hear me roar

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  • Candy6
    March 6, 2008
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    cute


  • delightfulmess silver member
    February 6, 2008

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    awe.... this is sweet. I love it.
    Very cute, with a great message. Best of luck in the contest.


    Delila


  • Naridill
    February 6, 2008

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    Rubric Grade 76

    Initial Impact/Reaction 7/10
    Originality 7/10
    Creativity 7/10
    Line-breaks/emphasis/flow 7/10
    Poetic device/verbiage 7/10
    Ideas/metaphors/imagery 7/10
    Cohesion 9/10
    Understandable/makes sense 10/10
    Overall poetic effort 3/5
    Emotion/personality/edge 7/5
    Title 8/10

    Simple but cute, would have liked to see better flow and punctuation but a light hearted approach.