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Entity Of Love

Souls universal entity
visions coruscate light
times eternal infinity
angels aphonic flight
loves spiritual epiphany.

 

 

Author notes

aphonic : spell check shows this word misspelled or none existent which is incorrect. aphonic means voiceless, unpronounced, quiescent, or unarticulated.


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  • LostInTheDream
    February 15, 2008
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    NICE!!!

    Great word choice!!! Nice use of 15 words!


  • The Kake Show
    February 15, 2008
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    this is good great word choice....


  • luna-midnight gold member
    February 13, 2008
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    awww beautiful picand poem, great job.
    best of luck in the contest =)
    stephanie


  • stavykm gold member
    February 9, 2008

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    Beautiful Just Beautiful

    This is one of my favorites for some reason. I love the picture it is breath taking then the rhyme flows so nicely throughout this poem! Loves spiritual epiphany, my favorite part. Excellent, beautiful poem.
    Thank you for sharing with me.
    Your sis
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm


  • dustookie2
    February 6, 2008

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    Like the picture both beautifully support the other.Nice rhyme as you do so well HH just flows off the page with ease.. good luck in the contest

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    February 6, 2008

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    I love this one, mind you, you're getting a bit rough on me almost had to get the thesaurus out on this one I love it, definately fits the short and powerful contest, packs quite the punch this once does.... well done hun

    Karen


  • ButterflyforChrist
    February 6, 2008
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    GORGEOUS! This is awesome poppa! Love you!

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