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Something So Beautiful.

I gaze at your face and still can't believe
That something so b e a u t i f u l,

came

out

of

me.

Your big brown eyes and perfect pink lips
Your tiny little toes and petit fingertips,

You

are

mine,

And my heart could explode
With so much l.o.v.e
Yet still it g
                r
                 o
                  w
                    s

My baby

My son

My e v e r y t h i n g,



I love

Y o u.

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Joshua Kinsey Evans

 

Born 17 th January at 22:28 pm

 

I love you with all my heart.

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    December 26, 2008
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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • leeshylou
    December 17, 2008
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    woops * still do he he

  • leeshylou
    December 17, 2008

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    aw such a sweet poem - exactly how I felt and steel do about my son.
    Congratulations to you i wish you and your baby boy the best.
    good luck in the contest

  • celadia
    December 17, 2008

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    Aww, it's so sweet and I can feel the love you have for your little 'un. I hope you have a good life with your baby and thanks for entering my contest, this is quite an original poem.


  • Immortal Obscurity gold member
    February 6, 2008

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    Congratulations, dear... I wish you and baby Joshua the very best Very well done, and though I'm not sure dirty-pretty was the best form for it, you still got so much emotion and love across.

    Great job!

    Laura
    xxx


  • Number 13
    February 6, 2008
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    Aweeee, so sweet! <3
    this incredibly gorgeous, love the imagery.

    Congrats!


  • Poet Gustav
    February 6, 2008
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    Beautiful. I hope mother & baby are very well.

    (Joshua is a great name by the way).

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