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The special gift

You stand at the back of the queue
Others were there before you
What in the world can you do
There are three doughnuts left

That lady just wants a white tin
And please could they slice it quite thin
Maybe I'm going to win
Still three doughnuts left

Oh no the next bloke is quite round
I'm sure he'll be standing his ground
And eating the doughnuts I've found
Only three doughnuts left!!

Thank goodness he wanted a bun
With hundreds and thousands for fun
(Amazing he only bought one!)
All three doughnuts left

The mum with the children is next
It appears that she's getting quite vexed
Her parenting instincts are flexed
Just two doughnuts left!

There's only one person ahead
Please say he's ordering bread
I wish that he's just drop down dead!
Now one doughnut left.

And now I 'm the head of the queue
My insides are screaming out phewwwwww!
I've bought the last doughnut for you!
There are no doughnuts left




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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    February 6
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    well done here.
    best wishes in all you endeavor.

    Passionspromise


  • pantress
    February 6

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    Oh my, could Sue be the female version of you? This was a cute poem and her added rhymes just added to the sweetness


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    February 6

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    I hope it's all round and so sweet
    Covered in sugar, that's neat
    Jam in the middle...complete
    Please let the doughnut be mine.

    I don't like the ones that are long
    To make it that shape is just wrong
    You waited, I knew you were strong
    Please say the doughnut is mine

    The jam should squeeze out when you bite
    Cover your chin, that's just right
    Make such a sticky old sight
    Many thanks for the doughnut!