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Empty graves

Empty graves
Waiting
Empty graves
Stretching
Empty fields
Waiting
For more empty graves

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At the cemetery

A contest entry

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  • LostInTheDream
    February 15, 2008

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    Wow

    I am absolutely amazed that you made this repitition work in a contest where you only get so many words to use! I really like it!


  • The Kake Show
    February 15, 2008

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    this is good i dont ussally lie so much repitition but ...it works here the lasdt line is kinda week and word coice could e better


  • luna-midnight gold member
    February 13, 2008

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    wow. this is so dark, greta job, a pleasure to read, keep up the amaxing writes
    stephanie =)
    good luck in the contest =)